Writing body language that empowers your character’s emotions
Let’s face it, writing body language is hard. In my first drafts, I either try to stay away from writing body language, or I just face the fact that it will be all cliched and awful and I’ll have to rewrite it from the ground up.
Thanks to writing teacher Margie Lawson, I’ve been learning tips for writing better body language and using tools like back-loaded sentences, cadence, and rhetorical devices.
For tips on writing body language with examples and break downs of those examples, read Margie’s latest post here.
Also, check out my earlier post, “Character emotions: two ways to write about the body,” that shows how author Dorothy Allison writes body language.
If you’d like to share some of your experiences or tips about writing about body language, please do so in the comments below.
Thanks for sharing that one. I often try to use body language in writing, just to add variety, but I don’t have a great instinct for it. Reading someone else’s advise really helps.