When I first started writing, I struggled with the passive voice. I remember one of my writing mentors drawing it to my attention. In an early chapter of my memoir I had too many “woulds,” “coulds,” and linking verbs. All of this led to my reader feeling distanced from my story.
As storytellers, we want to engage our readers. One way to do this is by using active verbs.
Here’s the difference:
He kissed her. (active) Read more